Comment by 🔹💫 Ayania💫🔹 on Travel Short Stories: Vacation Sex - Chapter 5

Comment on ChapterTravel Short Stories: Vacation Sex - Chapter 5
This short stories doesn't make any sense😑 like the previous chapter it ended with a cliffhanger if you make a story even though it's short at least make them a happy endingpoco sticker

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Like they first meet having seggs 
And later the mc find out about the ml's
. Background. and the ml apologize
. For not telling truth about his background
. And the mc well said, it's okay' at least your 
. Honest to me💚 And they fall in love 
. With eachother and Date!💘.  The end. 
it should be like this. even though
It's short at least they have a happy ending. 
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🌿Whebecomfamouauthor someday
I'll wriie about us🍁
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ndinwe never had🍁

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@🔹💫 Ayania💫🔹 This is like a sequel/trailer. You can find the whole story by searching up the title that is at the end.
@eggchan Has anyone found the first story 😭😭 I can't find it anywhere