The story is a bit hollow, empty of any attachments to reader. The author failed to pull the reader in with a well woven storyline, where a reader can inject themselves into or get lost in it. Good start, but disappointing as it progressed.
The story is a bit hollow, empty of any attachments to reader. The author failed to pull the reader in with a well woven storyline, where a reader can inject themselves into or get lost in it. Good start, but disappointing as it progressed.