Comment by TheFool on The Plain Apothecary Lady Won't Renew Her Contract. - Chapter 1

Comment on ChapterThe Plain Apothecary Lady Won't Renew Her Contract. - Chapter 1
Hmm, felt really forced / rushed. There are some details but not even remotely enough. No originality, as a kid she's given powers, powers get taken away by greedy, greedy country and family, had a engagement with the prince, grew up, family hates / care not for her, she's banished / engagement broken, and some other "handsome" guy already talking to her. 
  Next plot is they find out it's useless without her, as she's in the new country a series of events will lead a prince or a Duke(probably prince since she was first engaged to one) to get treated or find her shop and try fall for her after they see what she's capable of.