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This good guys? Would you mind rating it? 

I try to hide behind a veil,
Afraid to show my true face,
I struggle to be myself,
To find my own place.

I wear a mask of confidence,
But inside I'm shaking with fear,
I fear the judgment and rejection,
That I know is always near.

I long to break free,
To be able to express who I am,
But I'm held back by insecurity,
And the fear of being judged by others.

I wish I could be brave,
To let my true self shine,
But I'm trapped in this shell,
Unable to fully intertwine.

I long to cast off this mask,
And be my true self at last,
To shed this cloak of disguise,
And let my feelings shine with class.

The courage to let go, I'll find,
As I break free from the binds,
That have kept me hidden and small,
I'll stand tall and be myself, after all.

I can't move on


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Rikuu
RikuuGeneral·3 years ago

Yes, it's good, you are good at poetry, keep it up! Hope you can move on from her.

Rikuu
RikuuGeneral·3 years ago

Yes sorry for suddenly changed the language for a moment