Comment by I shouldnt be here on Love in Hell - Chapter 20

Comment on ChapterLove in Hell - Chapter 20
Idk I feel like this is missing something like where was the peak of the story like it the idea was thrilling but nothing really happened because we all knew where this was going and it actually went there without much happening 
poco sticker  I think it would've been better if Mc didn't just come back crawling immediately and if there would've been more drama then, before they settle to being together forever, for example, Mc meets a second man ML gets jealous and they find eachother again (ik it's very basic but it's just an example)

I'm already thinking about how I want to go home from school tomorrow...
I hope the guys that keep embarrassing me get pregnant with triplets together