Why the plot is like jumping from 1 story to other without proper build up, MC suddenly move in to the ML' s house, ML suddenly buys lot of clothes for MC (no scene at the mall). Every story is suddenly. The plot is a mess
Why the plot is like jumping from 1 story to other without proper build up, MC suddenly move in to the ML' s house, ML suddenly buys lot of clothes for MC (no scene at the mall). Every story is suddenly. The plot is a mess