Comment by Yosi Chan on Desire Me if You Can - Chapter 30

Comment on ChapterDesire Me if You Can - Chapter 30

I feel there is something wrong with the last few chapters, either there was a slight change in the story or in the characters development! And I’m not sure about the quality of translation either, there is a clear drop in the overall quality..

I like about Grayson that he is so dedicated to his goal and trying his best to get along with Dane, while the last is acting non chalant cause he is not taking things as seriously as Grayson.. 

And that pregnant girl?! What's her story.. I mean Dane slept with everyone in the city and no one got pregnant, I think there is some trap in this..

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@Yosi Chan that girl thought she got pregnant by dane. But she dated graysons sister previously and got pregnant. But the miller sister was a con. So the girl didn’t wanted her as the parent.  So as a last resorts she came to dane but dane told her he's omega & couldn’t get her pregnant 

@Memer thanks for sharing such facts, are they based on the novel or something because I think the chapters are up to date here. I didn’t get the heart of the pregnancy story, but I knew it’s not Dane’s. 

@Yosi Chan this is adapted from a novel. The manhwa is fast-paced but it's understandable 'cause maybe they have limit for the number of chapters and the novel is kinda long (I mean action-packed) so they need to make the pacing that way to accomodate all the events. This manhwa adaptation has 3 creators: the author of the source material (zig), the manhwa storyboard writer (ondo) and the artist (YP).

@Dooomi thanks for clarifying, they are definitely doing great work to deliver this adapted manhwa. The story is so good and so are the characters, I understand it’s not easy to deliver every detail in the novel especially its short chapters but I just shared my frustration anyways. I may read the novel to catch up what I missed, though I’m not a novel person. Thanks once again!