Chapter 1

No wonder someone disliked this one, this is only the first chapter and it takes forever to get anywhere.

Someone Stop Her! - Chapter 1

Dewani90

<a class="mention" href="/users/oDbyvM3Y" data-user-id="oDbyvM3Y">@Dewani90</a>  If you don't want exposition, go to nhentai.

Badwater

<a class="mention" href="/users/oDbyvM3Y" data-user-id="oDbyvM3Y">@Dewani90</a>  it's called slowburn dumbass.

Muchi Micho

<a class="mention" href="/users/oDbyvM3Y" data-user-id="oDbyvM3Y">@Dewani90</a>  Dood, expisition is the best. you clearly dont read many good stories huh?

Ryou Sensei

<p><a class="mention" href="/users/oDbyvM3Y" data-user-id="oDbyvM3Y">@Dewani90</a> go read a book then complain about a slow chapter with exposition, youve become so spoiled with instat storytime that you have no clue what real story telling is about.</p>

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