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@AlysHatter naaa... I get your point, but that's not what's happening to her.

Your point.... She is aware she is starting to have feelings for him or him for her but because she is being hurt, she puts up walls and tells herself to shut it the he** up and not ever go there. She would be guarded, a bit tough and overaware of everything and everyone. 
....which in my opinion it would make this story way way more interesting and her more likable 
The reality of FL..... ahhhh he's so red, does he have a fever?? I said publicly I loved him and right after that he's asking me about the wedding.... I wonder whyyyyy..... ahhh why is he smiling at me that way? He must really like the color of my dress because he must be remembering how his fiancée wore it one day..... (ML... you mean so much to me) FL.... ahhhh he probably misses his fiancée and told that to me as a rehearsal
Why do I feel weeeeird when I think of him and his fiancée???? 
😂😅 that's kinda the difference I'm so bothered about
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@deleted user sigh FL does not need to be aware of her feelings to be in Denise.

FL looks more like she has what is called avoidance and somatic attachment style. Though she could just be currently in the avoidance response to trauma. 

Denial is a really interesting symptom of trauma to write about. To a rational person it makes absolutely no sense how a person can not see the truth, but to the person in denial its the least obvious thing possible. She also has knowledge of the og story. So add in that knowledge, her trauma, the butler, and her goals. Now you have a perfect recipe for the subconscious desire to protect onceself and boom very plosiable very believable reason for FL to be an oblivious box of rocks.

I've read and dropped plenty of stories with obvious box of rocks leads, this story seems to have the most potential to not disappoint if the writer doesn't drop the ball. 

I recommend I’ll Be The Matriarch In This Life if you like aspects of this story but not the FL's love life chooses.