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KAT·2 months ago

@kiwi paunch i honestly agree…. The whole story feels a bit more flat from the first season, and perhaps it’s because there’s less cliche going on, but the chapters being 80% shorter than before also has something to do with it. Every new chapter is feeling like a special and not a regular chapter

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kiwi paunch
kiwi paunch·2 months ago

@KAT  YES THATS WHAT I WAS TRYING TO SAY! I love the concept and art so much but there’s like nothing at stake here no other characters mostly etc. and like you said the chapters are so short it really does feel like they’re like bonus chapters not the main story and it’s really just kinda sucky cause there’s so much potential 

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