Comment by kiwi paunch on After a Meal - Chapter 31

Comment on ChapterAfter a Meal - Chapter 31
kiwi paunch
kiwi paunch·1 month ago
Ch. 31

i feel like i don’t really know the characters or any of their like motivations and things are just suddenly happening. maybe it’s just sauce lost in the translation but the writing isn’t as good as it could be yknow? like i need more life to the world. 

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