Comment by SomeAB on Paranoid Mage - Chapter 92

Comment on ChapterParanoid Mage - Chapter 92
Ok interesting so far, but a few concerns: 
- the shock and awe of that fae king dying is not yet 'fully' shown (maybe next chapter)
- there needs to be introduction of new characters given the wide spread changes, as right now it feels that characters are one sidedly dying off

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Fay
FayMember·4 months ago(edited)
@SomeAB I was shocked and in awe of what was in front of me.
@Hex   I was shocked and in awe of what was in front of me.