Ok interesting so far, but a few concerns:
- the shock and awe of that fae king dying is not yet 'fully' shown (maybe next chapter)
- there needs to be introduction of new characters given the wide spread changes, as right now it feels that characters are one sidedly dying off
- the shock and awe of that fae king dying is not yet 'fully' shown (maybe next chapter)
- there needs to be introduction of new characters given the wide spread changes, as right now it feels that characters are one sidedly dying off