Alright...Looking like a manhua so the translation isn't perfect but it's actually bearable compared to other manhuas. Art is 100% an upgrade aswell, I like it. Uhh...This is kinda just like death note though with the book lol, not that it's bad, seems like you can make things interesting with the direction this is going.
Only tripe I have is the MC having that typical "badass"/edgelord red eyes loner look...But it's not the end of the world.
Suppose I'll keep reading, looks alright.