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umm this is the first time i have written somethig and i don't know if its good but i have written this with my heart and feelings for her 
Every time I look at those eyes of yours,

I feel like it’s been an eternity.

I have been lost somewhere in your gaze.

Your eyes are like the foggy weather of a winter morning;

Every time I look at them, I find myself lost.

Every time I look at them, my heart aches.

When you blink, it feels like a decade has passed.

Those eyes of yours could be the reason for my breakdown,

But also...

They could be the reason for my triumph.

Your eyes are the most beautiful thing I have ever seen in my life.

Every time I look at them, I find myself lost.
STRAIGHT
MALE

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@zoro  
pepe sticker I think they’ll like it If you’re writing this for some1 , it’s actually pretty good… keep going bro.......
@zoro After readingyour poem I made this 
My beloved 
As I sit by you at breakfast
After we have made love
I realize that I love you so much 
I want to spend eternity with you 
Be mine forever 
My sweet love 
@Kelly she will like it if i ever show her but i won't
@zoro i never thought man like you still exist who write such beautifully I know she gonna like it she is lucky
@zoro bro why not? It's so beautiful. I read it, and i tear a lil drop
@doing nothing thnx i wrote by only one thought that i want do smthng by which i can never forget in her life every time i read this i cou;d relive the thoughts and the emotions i felt with her
@Kelly because she is already have someone and i don't waant to be the third wheel in her life