Comment by anitaman on Wet Sand - Chapter 100

Comment on ChapterWet Sand - Chapter 100
Congratulations to Doyak, who not only managed to successfully assassinate her main character in two chapters, but also fooled me as a reader into thinking this story would amount to anything meaningful. For someone who claimed that this story would not be like your typical BL stories, she really shot herself in the foot. Congratulations to Ian, who lied to Jo and returned to his past and the person who had capitalized on his trauma. Congratulations to TJ, who got to break Ian’s leg, guilt trip him, commit a massacre and only received two years in jail for g** knows what, just to have the person he took advantage of be waiting for him with a Barbie Doll Dream House all without having his character developed beyond one that is nothing more than self-serving. He gets everything handed to him, all without even feeling the need to say “I love you.” Congratulations to TJ again for effectively being used as a stand-in for Jo— he has no true dynamic with Ian outside of arguing and s**. This story is one of the greatest examples of a narrative fumbles in BL history and I wish I could get my time back.

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@anitaman jo stans really don't know how to readpepe sticker but fortunately there are no "congratulations" for your rapist and manipulator jo
@user oh I got you, don't worry! Congratulations to Jo, who, as a result of Doyak's narrative inconsistency, ended up being a character that did not need to exist to tell an unoriginal story. One that probably would have been a season and a half had it actually focused on TJ and Ian, but for some reason actual readers are supposed to make sense of the fairytale ending on their own instead. :
@user you're saying Jo fans don't know how to read yet Jo never raped anyone nor did he manipulate anyone. What story did you read? Or were you just here for the sm** like every other TJ fan?