@Cookie no no, I'm not hating on the story. I'm just pointing out what I think the story tried to be critical of which is how the parents went about this entire thing. But also I must say that the ending didn't satisfy me (I did end up reading through it cause I got curious)
but generally I appreciate and understand the reason this story was written
Spoiler!
and I think them ending up together was the wrong call for this kind of story,