Comment by Dirty Angel Tootsies on Double Complex - Chapter 5

Comment on ChapterDouble Complex - Chapter 5
I kept reading this to see if it'll get any better but g** da** the writing in this is horrible...it's like a fifth grader obsessed with bad fanfiction wrote it. The plot is so rushed and everything feels like it's coming out of nowhere while also having all the characters as boring and one dimensional as possible. The brothers have zero chemistry as well, so everything has zero impact and falls flat. Da** shame because the art is so nice.
*unzips di*k*