Comment by lukas on Meeting Online is Fine, Right? - Chapter 3

The mangaka, yes, I finally learned the word to describe the author of a manwha, is once again showing me how they cannot physically nor mentally be compatible to write a good plot for a story. I have many words to exchange about this sorry thing the mangaka dares to even call a chapter. First, why did the mangaka think it was okay to add unnecessary sa into this bl? It was worse as is but the sa makes it even more unappealing, like did the already poor character design not encourage you to make a better plot? Also, I think they have memory loss aswell because why was the MC working at a convenience store in the first chapter but is now working as a warehouse worker? It seems as if the mangaka is somehow forgetting things that were already stated not even two chapters ago! And why is MC always talking about how "these are the golden years of my life if I don't party now, then when will I ever get the chance again?" I don't know, maybe ALWAYS, this stupid twink is acting as if his already disappointing and insignificant life is going to end if he doesn't party, just do it when you're out of college! Anywho, as I previously stated, I will continue to add my commentary on every chapter. I hope the mangaka finally grows their frontal lobe and gets to writing an actual good plot that isn't this slop.