Comment by Omo on Taming Master - Chapter 1

Comment on ChapterTaming Master - Chapter 1
Oh look, another author who doesn't know game design from an ass****. XD
why not make this a portal fantasy, or isekai? At least then your bullshit mechanics might fly.
Intro is cringe worthy anyway xD why's he gotta defeat it in "one minute" exactly?

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@Omo you kind of people are dumb ASF you know that right.To answer your first question, it's their story they can do whatever that want with it make your own,and he had to defeat it in one minute because the swift effect only had 1 minute left which after that he would go back to normal speed and most probably die you idiot did u even read the chapter
@aNovaGod A monkey can sh** in his hand and throw it against the wall. That doesn't make it fine art.
@Omo Not every story has to follow your personal rulebook to be valid. You’re free to dislike it, but calling it “cringe” doesn’t magically make your opinion deeper.
@aNovaGod why bend over backwards about a diference of opinion? ;p I say i is cring because i cringed. Nothin you say can change the past.