@Stardust you really don't need to read it if you don't want to.
I'm scrapping that novel anyway. Start back from beginning with clearer plot and world building. And also getting rid of the whole g** is involved in the story makes me cringe why I planed it on chapter 2. The rework I'm going for is leaning a little more on romance.
Suggested by a friend in a funny way, if you want your story to be interesting put a woman in it. The gremlin made me choke on water laughing.
Just giving me a suggestion here would be very helpful you don't need to read it.
What i really have no ideas on are the politics on the medieval world and social conflicts and economy on the sci-fi world.
I also don't have a decent plot to work with i was just coping whatever I'm reading at the time, like the novels extra, ending maker, and knights and magic. With a few tweaks to fit my world building.
I'm scrapping that novel anyway. Start back from beginning with clearer plot and world building. And also getting rid of the whole g** is involved in the story makes me cringe why I planed it on chapter 2. The rework I'm going for is leaning a little more on romance.
Suggested by a friend in a funny way, if you want your story to be interesting put a woman in it. The gremlin made me choke on water laughing.
Just giving me a suggestion here would be very helpful you don't need to read it.
What i really have no ideas on are the politics on the medieval world and social conflicts and economy on the sci-fi world.
I also don't have a decent plot to work with i was just coping whatever I'm reading at the time, like the novels extra, ending maker, and knights and magic. With a few tweaks to fit my world building.
