What I really like is how the male lead is finally showing personal growth—becoming more confident, honest, and looking beyond just his career. That development feels meaningful. But when it comes to the romance, the pacing feels too rushed. From the beach proposal controversy to FL planning to study abroad, and then suddenly ML realizing his feelings and they’re already dating in just 2–3 chapters.
The emotional build-up doesn’t fully match the weight of these big events.
I feel like if the author had slowed it down a little, the love story would feel more natural and satisfying.
The emotional build-up doesn’t fully match the weight of these big events.
I feel like if the author had slowed it down a little, the love story would feel more natural and satisfying.
A heart full of stories,collecting stories the way others collect memories.