Comment by LadyMoonSupreme on Age Of Arrogance - Chapter 66

Comment on ChapterAge Of Arrogance - Chapter 66
The storyline is good.. but I would have appreciated the story more if Carlisle was drawn with a bit more variation of facial expresssions (i.e., eyes, eyebrows, lips, etc.) and body language, especially now that he has feelings for Asha. At this point, after many chapters, I wish I could see him chuckling, laughing hard, worried, sincerely touched, very angry, jealous, vulnerable, etc. I recognize that be had these emotions already by now in the story but I wish that he does not always convey words and feelings with an arrogant and confident smile on his eyes and lips ---or maybe this is exactly the reason behind the title and it just isn't my cup of tea.