@Anonymous 23 as an artist I see unwanted exaggeration of certain features.
His eyes could have been bigger without making the face uneven just to urge his stature appear twice as smaller compared to the seme and other men domineering .
Previous chapters had it right.
They had enhancing wardrobe and fashion assigned to the seme and he wasn't drawn as large and uke comparatively also had right proportions.
Any artist who takes anatomical balance and harmony of sight seriously can understand.
This isn't just another story , it had an intriguing effect and art was the part of it.
One aspect is lost.
His eyes could have been bigger without making the face uneven just to urge his stature appear twice as smaller compared to the seme and other men domineering .
Previous chapters had it right.
They had enhancing wardrobe and fashion assigned to the seme and he wasn't drawn as large and uke comparatively also had right proportions.
Any artist who takes anatomical balance and harmony of sight seriously can understand.
This isn't just another story , it had an intriguing effect and art was the part of it.
One aspect is lost.