the happy ending is good but I feel disatosfy with it,its not like I want ectra story but the way it ended hmm,or is it only me?
Comment by Cheesecake on Murderer Llewellyn’S Enchanting Dinner Invitation - Extra. : Halloween 2.0
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@Cheesecake may be from the abrupt jump from ch89 to ch90, with the latter showing already a perfect-state shavonne after an almost death experience, making it a bit unrealistic as there was not a single explanation on who or how they even got outside the island. And really the whole process of talking with the royal family for Llewellyn to end up as a political refugee. (Though gotta keep in mind last minute plot changes, deadlines, and exploit to the artist)

