so hi everyone.. i typed down all the grammar mistakes(maybe not really) so here
that right! is the day that you waiting waiting waiting!(wow theres expressions here but not in the other word boxes?. you keep messing up in "thats right!" plus missing words and weird af)
im not that expected(sounds wrong)
dont make fun of lady(same thing from underneath)
are you ready lady?(it sounds wrong, put "my" after "lady"
master will be right away(missing words)
why are you stop saying?(g**.. change "are" to "did" change "saying" to "talking")
ive already called so many times(this is the era where theres no phones?)
we are flying on the sky(it also sounds wrong and put "we're" instead of the whole word)
we come already?(change come to arrived)
welcome everyone come to geungukje(idk i js think it sounds wrong)
is that mircaulous?(mircaulous ladybug lol)
that right, really really really like.(put some expressiopns?)
abel is keeping home(so basically theyre homeless now?/j lol)
that for having wiped hand on ladys cheek!(wtf..)
so lady have fun.(not cleaned)
can go there now(missing words)
that right, that giant carved wood doll could move was thanks to magic("that right" "could move was thanks to magic")
like geungukje, the duke in the west was slowly arrived( arrived is present tense and was is past tense)Ā
oh my, you are a very lovely guest(not really bad but try putting "you're" and other more words like this to make it look expressive.)
our shop can give you a try of our powdered.(powdered what? if you want to make it look like shes gonna yell the powdered something out loud put more dots)
and that turned into a delicious cookies.("a" is used for singular but "delicious cookies" is plural)
