Reread it, honestly. It sounds bad and he seems like a grade pe*** when you read the words but look at his face, why would he be looking upset? Why are his text to his new "lover" so blunt? The red head clearly went out of his way to show off that ring and the smirk in chap 4 when the uke runs off crying? Something ain't right, the seme looked heart broken after he left the office in chap 4. The red heads done something and the seme is pushing the uke away for a reason.... It's not just the writing you gotta pay attention to