Comment by laine on Payback - Chapter 53

Comment on ChapterPayback - Chapter 53
g**, jay was so unbelievably se** in this chapter. and you can really see his control slipping when he grinds his di** against yoohan's hole...he wants to put it in so badly but he holds back so they can savour it later !!! i love seeing tops get flustered, too, so him shaking and groaning when he came was a welcome sight >:)

for people complaining about the lack of penetration (novel spoilers):
Spoiler!
don't worry, it'll happen and it'll be out of this world hot because yoohan actually wants and asks for it. i don't mind seeing them try other things in the meantime ;)

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@laine g** I love seeing the tops shaking and savoring the moment, blushing a bit and absolutely losing themselves when they fu** the bottoms. I love seeing the bottom lose their mind with the top together, both moaning so hard when they come.

I might have a thing for this
@laine  where did u read the novel please