Comment by Ethan Elliot on The S-Classes That I Raised - Chapter 81

Comment on ChapterThe S-Classes That I Raised - Chapter 81
·2 years ago
Ch. 81
I've always found this event to be a horrific error on the author's point. So what? he has his brother back. "your original brother died." Yep, and your brother is still there. Learn from the past and take care of this one better. You have a mission of getting 50 S-levels to fall in love with you before it reaches 5 years and all he** breaks loose, and you haven't even reached 10. Instead of broadening out the plot and adding un-needed drama, it would be more effective to include conflict devices that can help build his S-level harem. The nurturing element already makes manwha soft enough.

...because ✨MAGIC✨

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@Ethan Elliot you cant be serious??? All he ever wanted, all he ever wished for, was for his brother to came back to him, all breathing and secure, not just getting "another brother from another timeline or dimension", and clearly, the yoohyun in this timeline is different from the one on the past because that's how the system of that world works apparently. And this isnt some "un-needed drama", i think this make the story even more interesting and adding more dimension, this give even more question to the story like "is there a possibility he could met with the "actual original" yoohyun once again, is there a possibility the past yoohyun somehow actually came back to life? What would happen if this overlapping timeline somehow met in one point?"
·1 year ago
@AngstLover all he ever wanted was his brother back... he got his brother back... then the author decided to huff 3 lbs of coke and yell "LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" and went full drama mode -.- he took a great story, with a great premise, with great promise, that could EASILLY get major, world wide contracts for translated manwha, easily get movies and anime... and then tossed in a wrench cuz... bunny sticker

this is one of the greatest wastes of a good medium ever, and this moment is when it begins to deviate. From now on it's all down hill. Gone are the days of nurturing S-tiers. Gone are the days of nurturing beasts. It's all about his other brother and the system from here on out. I'm still hoping this gets a remake bunny sticker