Comment by NeverWhere on The Greatest Estate Developer - Chapter 187

@NeverWhere Now author using anything without logic

@NeverWhere nig***, you don't even know what that means

@ThroatCloggler another fag***

@AlbertoAlberti Talking about yourelf?

@NeverWhere no u are a fag*** bro wth u mean forced narration people like you keep acting like you dont want it. If u dont even want some development or romance then fu** off no one told u to be a miserable person and read cause of "force narration". I searced forced narration to not seem dumb when explaining but it basically says naration that seems imposed or unatural, so like where did you see that?

@HUNTING LLOYD. FRONTERA   I don't mind romance and i don't see anything bad on that matter here.

I loved the first season, i loved even more the second one but i am able to see how much the quality dropped due to an horrble change of setting.

I usually don't like parody but in this work the author made wonders, making a parodic world feeling perfectly legit and making me cry to the tears over and over again.

In this third season this don't work anymore cause the world is breaking apart, the characters perfectly know it and understand the gravity of the situation but still make the same parody that now fell completely out of space ruining the experience.

You can be content with it, i'm not, the author could have done much better bat near the end of the second season i felt like the authour was changing things too mast and i now know why, for some reasons there is this urge to finish things and to do so a lot of things are diregarded making the story completely umbalanced, a thing that is happening more and more often in a lot of works and i am no more forgiving on this matter.

@NeverWhere bro tf u on your oringinal post was about how the aurthor was adding to much forced narration and now ur saying things that does not relate with "forced narration" or anything in the story for that matter. From what am seeing is like your saying that the author is changing the setting of the story to which i still dont undertsant. To me it feels like your saying that you dont like that the story is taking a more serious direction(I may be wrong).