Comment by Sero on Unchanged Man - Chapter 10

Comment on ChapterUnchanged Man - Chapter 10
1. The cliché of developing a problematic level of dependence on someone for need and approval when that person shows interest for the first time, due to a lack of interest or bad treatment from those around them.

2. The orphan cliché.

3. The "Oh, how could I forget this memory? It was so important!" cliché (important traumatic events are always forgotten).

4. The "We haven't contacted each other for so many years" cliché.

And more cliché...

Still, it's readable. I love the main character's impulsive behavior and the other character's freakishness.

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@Sero  Judging by how things are going, it's quite likely these clichés will emerge/develop over time. But they might not, of course. We'll see.