Comment by The zest fest on The Third Ending - Chapter 47

Comment on ChapterThe Third Ending - Chapter 47
I don't really like the Top much- I'm sorry about that but he set off some wild red flags during my second reading (aka now).

He seems/ is a bit manipulative and toxic and it honestly a set back for me even tho it's been astablished that he puts on a poker face every day to hide his true intentions.
- this information was found in the Q/A

Not to mention that he could have maybe started off slow with the relationship maybe gave it a fuc*** month or something to let Joon adjust to the relationship life instead of rushing in ( he also should have probably listened to his friend that has been in a relationship for over 2 years and managed to keep their partner happy that letting it take a slow burn let them adjust to life of being in a relationship instead of immediately rushing in and having s**)
-a few chapters back is where I found this information where he said that he wait until the partner is adjusted 

finally the "scene"kind of look like sexual assault to me I'm sorry if y'all think I might be overreacting look stupid or something like that but it looks odd and I don't know what you see but if you think and look back at it - Joon was immediately push into the rough part of s** and if you didn't notice that you can go back in the chapter you can see how quick and Rough was moving. Could have at least guided him a bit to let him know what's going to happen later on- start him off slow and then get a bit faster as it goes on?

I don't think Joon will ever realize that's there's a softer part of s** due to his first time being so rough and I blame Yoonseul (that just me tho)
does anyone realize that?
yes, there are spelling errors are in this - ❁
GWAD DAM, welp time to find something new to read
Anyway.
I'm gonna draw you pregnant
Bye✧⁠*⁠。
I'm mostly in school reading so watch it-