Comment by Divine Critical on The Darkness Was Comfortable For Me - Chapter 36

Comment on ChapterThe Darkness Was Comfortable For Me - Chapter 36
Thank you Ulysses. We got to enjoy a very comelling story thanks to your hard work and thank you for giving us more to chew on if we feel like seeking out the web novel. This is the type of story where the protag has too many allies in his corner too early. They basically solved his biggest problem for him and unfortunately that is an absolute no-no in story telling. As much as I enjoyed reading I understand why this story ended where it did and why the original author just ended their story eventually. I hope they use this lesson to write even more compelling stories beginning to end in the future. <3