Comment by Linzz Chrono on Shiawase ni Michita Yoru no Niwa - Chapter 6

Comment on ChapterShiawase ni Michita Yoru no Niwa - Chapter 6
I wanted this longer than one volume! It's a bit disappointing that they have to skip and summarize how Hajime won over Noah's family. It would've been so satisfying to see how he worked with his elder brother, Yamato, to "defeat" a noble family, instead of just reading it through walls of text.

But nonetheless, this was really beautiful. There are series out there defying the "fated pair" instinct and this, by far, is the most beautifully written - story, characters and pace-wise - for me.

Hajime is a character that would do anything for his love and even was willing to go as far as lock (based on when he strangled Noah) him up just to own him - which is an instict of an alpha and the way he should be by nature. It's the same for Noah, running search and background checks around Hajime. He is using whatever power and influence he has to get Hajime for him - his nature as an alpha. I am so glad that even as an uke, Noah didn't reject his alpha nature and even used it to his own advantage by monitoring Hajime's "fate" and even had to go through after-care. They trully love each other and you can feel it with their understanding and acceptance of each of their own nature - which is to possess whatever they want.
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It's the same with Hajime's friends. Even if they are just minor characters that didn't have much appearance in this book, they proved that despite being a fated pair, they can love each other and are ready to prove that love when it calls (esp to Hajime lmao). The contrast in their relationships and friendship is strong and makes a really good touch to the story to make it more interesting.
 
I also have to mention the elder Miyata - Yamato. I'm sure his prejudice against alphas and hisown gender was strongly influenced by how he is loved by Hajime, but he himself is a great leader and the perfect heir. Even as a beta, he knows how to spoil his alpha brother and can cooperate with him. Even if we say that he thinks he can use and work Hajime one day, he was very sincere at helping his younger brother out with his plan and supportive of both Hajime and Noah.
 
If you read till the end, you are a boss. 👏