Comment by purple_bloom21 on C-Class Esper's Memorandum - Chapter 23

Comment on ChapterC-Class Esper's Memorandum - Chapter 23
The big plothole is that there is actually an ESPer ---- the clingy redhead guy----who can determine if a person is lying... And they're not asking him to talk to Valnetine?

Did they forget him or am I the one who's confused? If it's the latter....

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@purple_bloom21

 

Thank you for saying this.... this has been irking me since he appeared. That is such a strong super power and should make investigating so much easier, especially in this case... If his power isn't limited, shouldnt he be talking to every witness, potential culprit and so on? He would be the perfect person to work for the police or in a courtroom. I hope the author has a good explanation for this later, because it really doesn't make sense at this point - they needed someone to get between the two mains, and threaten their relationship with this "if you help out, Jupiter will become your personal guide" thing - okay, but couldn't it have been another super power, if they're not going to actually use him to solve the case?!

Maaaybe they could get away with it, if they write it so the people involved are so manipulated that they don't even know they're lying and thus making his ability useless in this case. But for now it just feels like a major plothole...

@purple_bloom21

 

Thank you for saying this.... this has been irking me since he appeared. That is such a strong super power and should make investigating so much easier, especially in this case... If his power isn't limited, shouldnt he be talking to every witness, potential culprit and so on? He would be the perfect person to work for the police or in a courtroom. I hope the author has a good explanation for this later, because it really doesn't make sense at this point - they needed someone to get between the two mains, and threaten their relationship with this "if you help out, Jupiter will become your personal guide" thing - okay, but couldn't it have been another super power, if they're not going to actually use him to solve the case?!

Maaaybe they could get away with it, if they write it so the people involved are so manipulated that they don't even know they're lying and thus making his ability useless in this case. But for now it just feels like a major plothole...

@urgh and thanks for commenting.. I feel validated lol.

I am starting to think whether I should drop this or just let it marinate a bit... Coz right now... The story is so....

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@purple_bloom21 I feel you... I'm giving it a few more chapters to see where it's going. I still have hope that the author has some explanation for this. :D Somebody in the process of publishing this, must have told them, right? Right???