@Whit_knee how's your experience with it so far? Do you have any criticisms or do you find it perfect as it is?
Comment by Lonely Otaku on Whit_knee
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@Lonely Otaku Well the s** slave punishment trope is well done overused by other BLs and I don't believe the MC should've gained feelings for the ML so fast I mean that man murdered his father and such but this is a BL so it was gonna happen the plots good and art but I believe the MC should've stood on business from what I've read so far