Comment by Stardust on gabriel remoreras

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@gabriel remoreras I only know the last Airbender one, Kaelith (the first mc, the father is the 2nd) ohhh if you're talking about the continents' names, yes they name like that but has nothing to do who can use this element and that element, it's more of labeling since the races does relate to the name. I forgot the name Royal something is the website 1 year ago me wanted to write on.

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That idea is a great one, because I never read any story outside of fairytales, anime, manhwa, and manga I don't have that novelist mindset. Is there conflict between the two worlds? How is the magic system (s), hard or soft? How about world building? Does economy play in it? How is the culture shock on both of the boys because of the world? Just giving some questions, you don't have to answer them.

Yes the show, not tell thing is so true. I do struggle to imagine the lines in my head with that.
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@Stardust  I'm still revising it because it makes me cringe. It's 3000+ words only because I made AI refine and extend the short scenes I couldn't be bothered to extend myself. My friends say it's cringe overall, but they like the fight scenes (that's the part I put the most effort into — 1500 words of my own writing, the AI barely changed them).
For worldbuilding... my head was empty, so I let AI handle a lot of it based on my short input. I'm going for a mix of hard and soft worldbuilding but leaning mostly hard. Economy is definitely a weak point — I don't know what I'm doing there lol. Culture shock is the main comedy I'm playing with.
I spent a lot of time refining the characters (even the extras). The MC contrast is one emotionless sword genius from a medieval world vs. a funny nerdy genius from a sci-fi world.