Comment by RandomNPC on Chronicles of the Polar War - Chapter 7

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Nice convenient dream you got there bro, really made you realize your green power also heals you. He's one weird dream away from discovering he can also stop the apocalypse by waving his glowy hands in the air

Guess author saw injury take months to heal and just say, "well, who's gonna wait for that when you have OP superpowers"

And now it's time to introduce more characters.

Yup, yup. Nice going NPC old man. King of subtlety, tattling on MC. See? This what happened when you start stockpiling while not telling anyone what's going on. They think you're sus. He even said it to the totally-not-bad guy with glasses but since he smirked without glowing eyes he's gonna be the bad guy. The exlpoiter, the bad bad guy that'll try convince MC to share his goods or be gossiped as the bad guy (scary!!) in the whole neighborhood.

And nice suspicion going on, NPC old man. "It's as if he's making preparations to get through winter." very modern look, definitely doesn't know that's what his ancestors been doing to survive the cold thousands of years into the past

Also other characters, blah blah blah they're gonna be taken advantage of and die, how dare they exist. On and FMC#1 is there too.

And then snap back to MC. Story really wants to show him living good by contrast of NPC crowd struggling outside.

But wtf

I enjoy reading comedy, romance, action, fantasy and historical :)
I don't like stories with no struggles but it's an exception if it's interesting enough xP
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RandomNPCMember·11 months ago

I joked about AR but oh my g** it looks like a bad AR/Barrett M82/M107 .50 Cal/SBR hybrid while trying to look like a failed Dragunov SVDS copycat. Literally no stock, no shoulder pad, no cheek weld, no brace = zero recoil management. No visible charging handle, no bolt, no ejection port = nothing to chamber, nothing to eject, ammo is just hopes and dreams. The scope looks misplaced, it's literally fused to the gas tube and kissing the barrel while melting your optics off every round. Even the muzzle brake looks like it can't fire anything above .22 LR without twisting your spine. It looks like a Frankensteined Wish product inspired by COD and Build a Bear. Oh and barrel looks like overcompensation

It's structurally confusing and spiritually replaced by Handlung Der Bequem. I don't see a gun, I see a concept

That thing looks like it can't survive winter, even the sheen looks like WD-40. Semi auto my a**, it can't even decide if it wants to snipe or be used as a SAW or have the precision of a DMR. It's got the body that says, "sorry mate, I can't shoot past 100 yards without breakdancing and maybe make you eat your clavicle."

RandomNPCMember·11 months ago

Mangabuddy.com ad placement is horrible, I can't even click reply or go to next chapter without first being redirected, I'll just drop this story and continue somewhere

Pa pa CatMember·9 months ago

@RandomNPC my advice is to use brave browser to read ....literally no ads

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