Oh my g** ! Coming from a not talented / non writer / not even someone who worth to say this things . have you heard of a plot wise , or even a climax of the story ? Well , I guess for someone like you , it is lame . But , for a real reader , this is the arc where the problem gets in .. Haizzs ! Why am I explaining this to a brat like you . I guess you don't deserve to read for free .