@my ar** is dead are you sure you're reading this properly or just scrolling through the chapters quickly? There are definitely improvement in their relationship. Where's the fun if they get together this early in the story? There needs to be slow burn romance in order to hook the readers more.
Comment by Kaise on my ar** is dead
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@Kaise Agreed.
Though still they have a point. This new pisshead coming in so quickly out-of-nowhere feels quite forced. Could of at least taken a break from all the drama and slowly built up towards it.
Though still they have a point. This new pisshead coming in so quickly out-of-nowhere feels quite forced. Could of at least taken a break from all the drama and slowly built up towards it.