Comment by Nwankwo Chioma on Heartbeat Error X - Chapter 42

Comment on ChapterHeartbeat Error X - Chapter 42

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@Matagasia Ole Chirimi Do you mean I'm nosy. When reading it there's the time it's interesting and the time it annoying that doesn't need to cover it. We are not kids just understand.
@Nwankwo Chioma you've got me wrong- wasn't criticizing but asking if you understood, could you kindly explain the first few panels with the guys in furry suits: didn't get where they came from and how they fit into the story- they appeared nd disappeared randomly as a plot device & I really don't get how they fit in the narrative...