Comment by B×tch move on Violet Blooming in Patronage - Chapter 8

Not to be rude, but, shouldn't the FL feel more traumatized? The writing itself is good, but, the human emotions are very complex we know that—But, if it were me, a 5-10 year old child, I'd feel traumatized, watching my "sisters" Get slaughtered and killed in front of me, especially since as an "orphan" They were the only family I had. Overall, the writing is good, just need to add more "relaistic" Emotions, and also, I hope the FL get her justice soon