Comment by PlotBeforeSleep on chokerontheroad

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@chokerontheroad Between Passion and CA, I'll say that Taeui and Ilay's relationship is the ones that are too impulse and immediate with no roots at all. Ilay's obsession with Taeui just doesn't really make any sense. Taeui's actually the one who has some kind of stockholm, his difference with Taekjoo is that Taekjoo will never look back if ever he got the chance to escape Zhenya's grasp, and every escape attempts he did and compliance with Zhenya is all for his survival, while Taeui is even willing to go back to Ilay (it's now in the current Passion arc) without even a sliver thought of all the abuse and how he should be running away from that man, and him constantly trying run away when Ilay held him captive is just him being rebellious against Ilay (which doesn't tie to his survival at all), even the time he first ran away from Ilay and the moment Ilay finally got to talk to him and told Taeui he'll hunt him and find him, Taeui even felt thrilled about it (which is already a sign of his inner conflicted feelings for Ilay that he doesn't know yet), which made Taeui and Ilay's relationship too impulsive and immediate without any structured buildup at all.

Both stories are still great tho, but CA just has more relationship structure, plot and character's depth (with psychological roots and upbringing), while in Passion is more immediate than developed.
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@PlotBeforeSleep I get why you might think CA had better plot than passion but like for me I got that author actually had a bit of supernatural stuff in passion by adding the red string and everything else. And the way I see it was even though taeuil was a Dumbo for falling for a man cuz of his hands and stuff. Ilay actually liked Taeuil.... And yeah thats my opinion... Taekjoo is like smater one though... I loved both of the stories... Ig Its my unfair bais towards passion is what playing but as I said it's my opinion