@Rok there's a solid chance I'm going to regret making this comment a month from now.
Honestly I don't think his appearance is that bad, for a fictional story of this genre. I'm black, me and my sister have relatively pale skin and have had both straight and curly hair, both of my brothers have also had straight hair, it wasn't that hard to do. I've also had blonde hair and my siblings have thinner noses than me. Both my parents are black immigrants, that shouldn't matter but I'm adding it just case someone hits some bs like saying "you're not black enough"
I dislike the fetishism of black men that this genre seems to enjoy but what you're describing are stereotypes that not all black men have; you putting them in a box of only being allowed to have certain features might also be harmful.
I'm not going to read the rest of this story cause I personally didn't like it or the comments but if he is black, you saying he can't be because he doesn't fit your personal views of black people is also terrible in a similar but opposing way
As a tangent you can also complain about the lady having no nose, being pale as paper and having the body of a model despite being an average tutor, etc. There's a whole host of bs beauty standards to complain about that this genre really loves using despite being caustic if applied to real life
Honestly I don't think his appearance is that bad, for a fictional story of this genre. I'm black, me and my sister have relatively pale skin and have had both straight and curly hair, both of my brothers have also had straight hair, it wasn't that hard to do. I've also had blonde hair and my siblings have thinner noses than me. Both my parents are black immigrants, that shouldn't matter but I'm adding it just case someone hits some bs like saying "you're not black enough"
I dislike the fetishism of black men that this genre seems to enjoy but what you're describing are stereotypes that not all black men have; you putting them in a box of only being allowed to have certain features might also be harmful.
I'm not going to read the rest of this story cause I personally didn't like it or the comments but if he is black, you saying he can't be because he doesn't fit your personal views of black people is also terrible in a similar but opposing way
As a tangent you can also complain about the lady having no nose, being pale as paper and having the body of a model despite being an average tutor, etc. There's a whole host of bs beauty standards to complain about that this genre really loves using despite being caustic if applied to real life