Chapter 75

@Mikael I agree I mean I do think that the Story was amazing but especially the end fight was a little short and like they could have gotten more out of it with the Fakt that the bone King semes to have been vandel father and I also think that the fight was like ridley killed a bunch of soldiers but who the fu** cares.  I think it was better in the beginning and the Ending was a little forced.

I read it cause I liked the whole ennemies to lovers plot but it's really mid I'm gonna be honest......

Mikael

Jdjdj

@Jdjdj I've actually read the Wattpad (actual) story from this... Well it was like 6 years ago and it was really different from what I've read, none of that bone king or the Crystal Sword Shenanigans... Lol when you said that the ending was kinda forced I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH YOU cause I didn't recall Ridley getting the powers from the Bone king and all that... All I recall is that both of them got married after reconciling when Ridley found out Vandel killed his father... Idk if it's just me or the Wattpad story got revised or newer chapters were added😐😐😐

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