Comment by Cyrinite on PASSION - Chapter 1

Comment on ChapterPASSION - Chapter 1
The translation is killing me. I can read it fine, but the improper grammar and usage of words is annoying... 
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𓆩𝐷𝑎𝑔𝑔𝑒𝑟  
𓆩𝐶𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑐ℎ  
𓆩𝑅𝑖𝑡𝑢𝑎𝑙  

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