Comment by Ley on Mysticedge

@Ley The novel is blo*** terrible. Probably the worst web novel I've read. I'm not a writer my self so it's not really my place to criticize someones work how ever when ur work is written with a monotone subjective and give next to no explanation on the current events such as why our mc falls in love with our heroine. Or why our mc falls into the most obvious trap imaginable it's very off putting. Makes it goes from enjoying reading a story to forcing ur self to read it just to see if the writer ever learns and no they do not.