Comment by kyren on Define The Relationship (Yaoi) - Chapter 44

Comment on ChapterDefine The Relationship (Yaoi) - Chapter 44

im gonna be real the mcs and the sheer extensive miscommunication is really starting to tick me off... the genuine concern of "why do you keep mentioning other alphas like im someone that can be passed around or some s*x object unimportant to you" is disregarded by a "oh sorry its just something i say in bed lol" and karlyle is just Okay with that conclusion. i understand neither of these guys think they're important to each other because of their miscommunication but the way ash handles karlyle and his feelings esp in bed (the aggression, repetitive 'no' and 'stop' but still continuing) is a bit uncomfortable. and also him using the fact that karlyle is very sensitive to him to sort of control him and have s*x? it's so strange. ash is not giving me good vibes here.

i want to see a lot of f*cking but please don't f*ck the plot. all i ask for is a good plot. and f*cking.

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i agree with u specially about him continuing the s** part even after the repetitive no cause i literally stopped reading few seconds after seeing that was like is this normal? or like shouldnt he stop bcaus yes karlyle may come off as kind of shy but he does mention his feelings if he wanna continue the sexual part and it just felt really weird that ash simply didnt acknowledge his repetive nos even though he had before

He just didnt know whats happenin and didnt know those feelin, thats the reason for "NO"...and Ash as more experienced one knows whats goin on and wanted him to feel it and also finish him so..in my opinion ure kinda narrow or ur point of view is too negative in this situacion.
BUT!!!!
He totally messed up when we said "other alphas..like wtf man...he already told u u gonna be his first and also last alpha.... OMG
And yeah...after that he should have stoped....cuz I would go from ocean to sahara between legs so.. he messed it up....
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And one more thingggggg

I dont know if u know what pillow talk is, but in case u didnt know..its something u say to your partner in bed, while u have s** to excite them more.
Like when guys says to his girlf bi*** or wh*** or something like that, hes doing it for her, cuz she likes it.. not because she is some wh***. She can be, but its not necessary to call someone like that.

And in my opinion Ash is trying a lot of thing with him in bed cuz its his first alpha and he doesnt know what he likes and what he doesnt like sooooo trying some pillow talk here and trying to take him to his limits and showin him a lot of diff ways to c**. Like he can come with c** and aslo he can like it so much that he can actually "pi** himself" like what have u seen.....

But im girl soooo guys pls help here

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bro why is there so many long comments. people actually take time to read these? bro i aint even reading the bl properly im just looking at the pictures

You may be right Bliss, but mostly it goes hand in hand *_* i actually dont know the diff myself
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And Ye Engel........ people actually read those comments, its kinda funny. And as u can see, lot of them got different veiw. U got really hard name :D
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"pillow talk" are the sweet nothings and light conversation after s**.
"Dirty talk" is what Ash is doing along with the domination or "forcing" of Karl to do things he's not comfortable with. Ash takes it wayyy too far

Actually i found time to google that and u kinda right buuut, u can use pillow talk during s** or after, or just during cuddling act. And ye, its relaxing time for partners to share some privacy stuff. But dirty talk is used mostly in foreplay..soooooo....
I think both of as has some points.
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Aaaaaanddddd ye, its kinda over the line. But how can he know what he like or he doesnt if hes not gonna try it? How u think BDSM people were born?

Theyre both adoults, so I THINK they will talk about thinks they dont like in bed. I know its diff from reality, but at least I WILL HOPE for that.