MC is a bit of a quack.
He wants to be a hero, or be the best swordsman that beat Ignet?
Make up your mind, wanting one or three is fine as a goal, as long as it is small and reasonable. Wanting to change the world and be the hero that is already 2 GRAND desire, now you want to stand among legends? which one is your desire really? Sh** gets confusing with what he wants, he goes in one direction to pursue what he wants then take a 180-degree turn to a different pursuit of desire.
