I'm still unsure of how I feel about the artwork. The transition from normal art and comical art is very jarring. I'm fine with either separately but when you go from panels of one to the other its jarring. I like the story so I'm fine there. Just the comparison of the two art syles is jarring. I don't have that issue with some other works that do the same thing, and even use the same comical art syle, so I'm unsure why I don't like it here.