Comment by Ivy Sapphire on What It Means To Be You? - Chapter 5

Comment on ChapterWhat It Means To Be You? - Chapter 5
That was to short for him to come to terms he was a complete jackals to her. I wanted him to suffer more in her body. To drive home just how crummy he was to her. Especially see how his family treated her. Oh well

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@Ivy Sapphire I eanted him to interact with his family